tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6874087080445556918.post2337573947588595201..comments2023-11-02T01:54:47.691-07:00Comments on 218: Saro: Camel & Cart in-houseDela Longfishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13619734419271952371noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6874087080445556918.post-20101866779993691892007-05-04T01:02:00.000-07:002007-05-04T01:02:00.000-07:00Thanks Dela for the comments. I will bring my refe...Thanks Dela for the comments. I will bring my reference with me to class and if you have any time I'd love to go over what you have pointed out.Saro Orfalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18175625673165729475noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6874087080445556918.post-78559528631542725452007-05-03T11:35:00.000-07:002007-05-03T11:35:00.000-07:00Saro,I love this drawing. I have to compliment you...Saro,<BR/><BR/>I love this drawing. I have to compliment you on the way you have stylized the Camel. I think it is a great improvement from what I saw earlier, and I think comes the closest to the style that was set for the project.<BR/><BR/>The cart is starting to work, be sure you are looking at reference when you do these. I know a cart this imaginative would not exist to get reference of, but if you use reference in the construction as a foundation then build on top of that with your imagination you have something new and unique that is still familiar to people/audience.<BR/><BR/>If you were looking at reference bring it in to class and I'll go over it with you and try to explain better what I mean.Dela Longfishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13619734419271952371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6874087080445556918.post-21767879824789389922007-04-28T13:58:00.000-07:002007-04-28T13:58:00.000-07:00Thanks Nigel,I see what you are saying, I ll try t...Thanks Nigel,<BR/>I see what you are saying, I ll try to fix that. My initial idea was that he has heavy things on his neck that is making it bend downward, and I though that gave him some character. thanks for the comment man.Saro Orfalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18175625673165729475noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6874087080445556918.post-35976944764659214412007-04-28T13:18:00.000-07:002007-04-28T13:18:00.000-07:00Saro, this design is beautiful man. The only sugg...Saro, this design is beautiful man. The only suggestion i have is that the information gets lost just a little towards the end of the neck. theres alot going on in such a small space. great job though, i really like this design.Nigel Lihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16638280940194164982noreply@blogger.com