Dela--This is the revised in-house piece we talked about in class. I extended the entryway to the course to try and get some normal scale elements and help make the transition from normalcy to insanity more pronounced. I also elongated the hole at the end to give it a little more space as you suggested. I will have some color comps up soon as well.
Thanks!
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This is awesome, JP! You have infused so many themes and props from the story...it is refreshing.
JP.
I think this piece is looking good, all the elements you've included are great. Thanks for making the changes we spoke about in class. The only issue I have, looking at the piece now, is how do we keep from losing all the great elements in the piece over all. This deals with leading the eye, what is the initial read, the secondary. Look at how the testtube tops almost form a tangent, they seem to all form one shape.
I attached a quick sketch at the bottom that just addresses this in the shapes, breaking up the tangent and making the Hyde bottle the primary read.
Any question, please get in touch wih me.
Wow, you are right about the similarity of shape. Thanks for the visual feedback. That really makes things clear. I will get on that as soon as I can and repost with my color comps.
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