Thursday, March 15, 2007

Saro's revised Characters...




Dela,
Here are my revised characters for the ghost hunters based on the comments I got last Saturday. I did some changes on the Thai character. Are these working better now? I am definitely ready to do more changes as I want to make this a portfolio piece, so any help to push it more and make it better, then go for it and be harsh on the critique. Thanks Dela.

1 comment:

Dela Longfish said...

Saro,

Here's a quick skecth based on your clock maker. This was a quick sketch, but I think it shows more shape development, like we talked about in class.

In the head see how the shape and silhouette is pushed, using the hair to help. Even the anatomy is pushed, that gives a us definition and distinction between the masses of the body.

Another thing like I wrote on the blog is to make sure the pose is working before you get into the detail work. With the pose just remember everything you've learned at state. Weight, balance, porportion, gesture.

If you have any questions let me know. We can also talk more about this in class.