Sunday, February 11, 2007


Hi Dela~ I wasn't able to make it to class on Saturday on account of being sick. I'm posting the other two in-house drawings I did for that class. I was happy with this work, but Bunny didn't find any interest in my ideas, so I'm a bit at a loss now. Any suggestions you can give to help me out will be so appreciated. Thanks so much. Lauren R.


Oberon said... like it.

Dela Longfish said...

I really like what you have started to come up with here. Using the branches and roots really takes advantage of your location and setting. It also creates some very nice paths for the golf ball to travel, I especially like the one that loops.
Some things to be aware of... What I feel is working strongly here is the use of this branch path, but I lose the feel of a tree house. And with your earlier pieces I felt the oppsite, the tree house was staring to work but I didn't get a sense of the tree and course.
So what I would like you to do is combine the two, the tree house and the branche path.
In some of your drawings you have animals, I really like that and think you could push that as well.

Dela Longfish said...

From here...
I would like you to spend a day doing ideatioins combining the tree house and the branch path together. Post your work and from there take it to in house and then paint.

Lauren Reeser said...

Thanks Dela. I'm getting a stronger idea of how to go about this -combining the treehouse and the branches- and about who my audience is. I'm confident about it now :-). Thankyou so much for helping me! --Lauren